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Flowers of Spring by toshema

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First of this picture is absolutely stunning. The focus you used, the composition and everything is great. You picked a very beautiful set of flowers to photograph for sure.

The only thing that's off to me is the two pieces of grass along the front and side of the picture. They're distracting and maybe moving them out of the picture during the shot would have helped out a little to make the picture a little less busy.

Outside of that this picture is very lovely. Your use of the rule of thirds, color, composition and f-stop show very strongly here. You're well on your way to being one of the greats of photography. Keep up the great work!
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toshema Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks zoo much for the critique, I agree 100%. I just wish I thought of moving the grass....
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AJ333 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It doesn't hurt the picture too much at all though. It's very well done overall :heart:
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toshema Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^_^ :heart: !!
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